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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12936
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是高级词汇使用较恰当;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;文中从句使用不丰富。

用户练习作文:

With the development of economic,the electronic communication become more and more popular.however,face-to-fece is play main role in our life and work. We are communicate with our parents by computer or iphone and so on.what’s more,Not only our life but also our work is get along with electronic communication.By and by,when we face to face each other and feel terrible.As if we can’t communicate happily.Maybe electronic communicate is too much not good for us.Of course,which electronic communication can’t replace face-to-face.whatever the internet how to develop rapidly.Everyone needs to make friends.on the same time,many things is not solve by electronic communicate but face-to-face contract. That’s all,electronic communicate have influence on our life,work and every aspect of our.but face-to-face is more important for us.

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