小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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when i was a primary student,i had several good friend.jiangmin was the best friend in them.he was silent,but he always help me in study.when we caught the fish,he usually gave me his fish. when we graduated,he worked at the railway station.i once went to his unit where it is in the mountain. i rember him even though i have left for long time.