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错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Life itself is short,but it also can be remembered by people for long time. The most important is that how to make life meaningful. Firstly,we should love ourselves.Only we love ourselves can we love those things around us.Only we respect ourselves can we respect others.Only we pay attention to our health can we pay attention to our parents' health. Secondly,we never stop to get new information.Everyday we study some new knowledge such as a new song,a new poem or a new skill.Enviroment changes so fast. If we don't become better than better,we would be abandoned by enviroment. Lastly,life is not only sunny but also rainny. We must have a strong heart to beat challenges and difficulties. If we are always optimistic,positive and strong,we could make our life meaningful.
可可英语 - 划词释义
