考研作文：人脑和电脑的不同

作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用。

When the importance of waste too much of using mobile phone gain an overriding focus from the world, can we still stand here detachedly for what kind efforts can we make.Actually, the topic sentence is a wake up call to send us a message that we human race should not spend too much time using mobile phone instead of doing it toward people himself. Several factors can weigh heavily for the current situation, yet, suspend at the topic of the list are the following. To begin with, people who do their works rely on the phone heavily, just like the fish can't live on without the water. What's more, the mobile phone is too convenient to people to use and can easily obtain more professional knowledge. Last but not least, the function of mobile phone is becoming increasingly powerful than people's ability present. Fortunately, that isn't the day of judgement and we need gradually shrink the time of uses mobile phone from now. Just do it by yourself, and you will find you are the master of your life.