2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高，高级词汇的积累上也要再接再厉。

Sometimes,I make mistakes in making decisions about something as soon as I see then or hear them. Actually,individuals often make the same mistakes as mine. This is incorrect when you do not spend time thinking about them and make conlutions.Since what you see might not be true. And you need to keep calm to anything and subsequently you are likely to get the right answer.