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Everyone want success, but how can we achieve that? There have many answers, like work hard, or overcome every trouble that you meet, or never give up. All these answer can't succeed without a strong will. A strong will can guarantee the success, only the people who have a strong will can succeed. As a student, the strong will is equally important to us. If we want to be admitted into key university, or have a wonderful job in the future, it is necessary for us to have stong will, and pursue everything to the bitter end. Just like the old saying, Genius is one percent inspiratio and ninety-nine percent perspiration. Rome isn't built in a day, we need stick to one thing with a strong will can we have a great achieve. In summary, a strong will should become a part of our life, so that the possibility that we succeed is much bigger.
