小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。

Jenny is my friend. She lives in a big family. Her father works as the government staff and her mother is housewife. They have four children. My friend , Jenny is in middle. She has one older sister, one younger sister and one younger brother. They are in China. She is living outsid china and working as finacial advisor in Vancouver. As a prifessional woman , she is very busy but When she has free time , she missed her family very much.