小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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Jenny is my best friend. She lives in a big family. Her father works as the government staff and her mother is housewife. They have four children. My friend , Jenny is in middle. She has one older sister,one younger sister and one younger brother. They are in China. She is living outsid china and working as financial advisor in Vancouver. As a professional woman , she is very busy but when she has free time,she missed her family very much.