采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者能较灵活地使用高级词汇,但要注意减少拼写错误。
Recently, we have faced a phenomenon that an increasing of students cheated in exams. What my insistence is by no means support this behavior. What counts most in our tradditional moral is the integrity which can become the first factor be detected in any situations. Intimate bonds between families needs faith from each member, mutual trust is based on daily behavior of superiors and subordinates. So as to students and teachers, if there were too much cheating exams, students will have no integrity in teacher's mind. Therefore, how can we drag them from cheating exams? In my college, a student who has many cheating exams should be signed in the records which will company he or she all over the life. As a result, the significance will be impressed in their mind. What's more, if several instance have been setted in the board of each school, better efficiency will be accepted. Besides, there can intall some harewares in the corner of every classroom before having a test. In short, school must take strict regulations to defend the cheating exams, and moral education should always be necessary in rules.