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文中词汇使用灵活，高级词汇使用较丰富；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
Show your hands and keeping our virtue It is regarded a traditional Chinese virtue to help others, while nowadays, we can see from the screens that helping others may lead some problems for ourselves. So more and more people choose to stay away with this kind of situation. They are not unwilling to give out their hands, but they don’t trap into endless trouble. However, is it really the only choose for us to refuse to help anyone? Just for preventing trouble, is it worthwhile to lose our traditional good virtues? Maybe there is some other ways that we can choose. We should keep in our mind that helping others is also helping ourselves, so we should not turn our back to those in trouble. Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, we can reach out the help of the video of our phones to prevent deliberate threats when helping others. Now our society is a society with definite legal framework. With valid proofs, we can comfortably take our steps to help others. But it must emphasize the necessity to ensure the safety of ourselves. When helping others , a clear consensus is important for ourselves. For example, when you face the situation where someone is threatened by a crime using a knife, after calling the police, you should keep clam and try to delay the time. Don’t fight with the crimes with bare arms , because it is very possible to do harm both to yourselves and to the one needing help. In addition, when facing someone needing help, try to analyze the situation using your wit and according to your own strength. It is common to see someone disguising as the disables along the road looking for others help. So first of all, we need confirm whether the one really needs help, and calling the police is wise facing such situations. When confirming that someone really needs help, you can find your own ways to help it according to your own ability. For example, if you are a student, facing a situation that you alone don’t have enough strength to help the one needing help, you can help him along with your classmates. The strength of a team is enormous. If so, you can not only help others , but avoid some trouble owing that you are a team. No matter what happens, we should not forget that solution is always more than trouble. As long as we work together, can we keep our traditional values all the way. Our society needs the one willing to show her hands , instead those escaping.
