错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中高级词汇的使用比较灵活,但有个别拼写错误;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
Now, Internet is more and more popular. People can study and work on the Interner.It is important in our life. Some people think Internet benifit to study and work because it make us to do something more effiency. Others think it is bad for teenagers to use Internet.The reason is that teenagers is easy to be abandon themselves to Internet. Thus, it have bad influence in their study. In my opinion,Internet offer more help to us.On the one hand,we should use it reasonable ,for example,chate data,read electronic books and watch the news.On the othe hand,we could consum little time to amuse ourself by Internet.All in all,If we rational application ,we can benefit from Internet.