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Recently, we have faced a phenomenon that an increasing population of students cheated in exams. What my insistence is by no means supporting this behavior. What counts most in our tradditional moral is that the integrity which can become the first factor be detected in any situations. Intimate bonds between families need faith from each member, mutual trust is based on daily behavior of superiors and subordinates. The same as students and teachers, if there were too many cheating exams, students will have no integrity in teacher's mind. Therefore, how can we drag them from cheating exams? In my college, a student who has many cheating exams should be signed in the records which will company he or she all over the life. As a result, the significance will be impressed in their mind. What's more, if some instance has been setted in the board of each school, better efficiency will be accepted. Besides, there can intall some harewares in the corner of every classroom before having a test. In short, school must take strict regulations to defend the cheating exams, and moral education should be always necessary in rules.
