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Will financial disparity affect friendship? Friendship is an indispensable part in everybody's life no matter one is rich or poor, powerful or powerless. In China, there is an old saying that birds with the same feather flocks together and people who are similar come together, which seems plausible. But actually, we have a misunderstanding of this saying. I think the similar people mentioned here do not mean they are similar in property. My views of similar people are those who have similar world values, personalities, hobbies and so forth. So, I hold the belief that financial disparity will not affect friendship. Some people may lack confidence and uneasy when they confront someone who is richer or sounder in finance. Because of such feelings, they may deliberately keep much distance with the richer friends. They never open their heart to the richer friends, thus never being true friends to each other. In this case, what affect friendship between each other directly is not the financial disparity but the reserved heart? If We can open our mind and get rid of the mindset caused by misunderstanding of the old saying that birds with the same feather flock together, we'll make a difference. In additional , we can make friends with anyone no matter he or she is rich or poor as long as we can share something each other or comfort each other. For instance , if we are both football fantastic, We can play football together, and in this process, our friendship will be taken care of by our same hobbies. Therefore, We need to be confident with ourselves and be frank and open-minded to our friends even though they have more sound finance than us. As long as We open heart to each other, we can find something We are similar and share that with each other, thus being true friends in the end.
