作者词汇表达较丰富多样,高级词汇使用较熟练;从句数量不足,可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
With the ecnomy development, the level of person's life more and more high. In order to make people convenient to go shopping , Disposal Bags had used ordinary. The Disposal Bags offer convenient to us ,but we can not deny it has bad effect on the environment. With the use of Disposal Bags, it cause environment pollution, for example,alter the rivers into ugly,make many white waste lead to increase the need for waste dumps. Thus,our country begin to limit the use of Disposal Bags.The action is significance for our environment.After limit the use of the Disposal Bags,people start using their bags and the white waste was reduce.In my opinion,we should pay more attention to environment,reduce the use of Disposal Bags.Let us make our enviroment become well.