小学英语一年级作文：Clocks

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句使用量不足，应增加从句和复合句的使用；单词拼写做得很好，请注意积累词汇量。

Since clocks are invented by people, the clocks become the best friends of human. There are a lot of brand clocks which it is using in general life. There are the mechanical clocks, the electrical clocks , there are the west watches , there are the wall watches ect ...... also the clocks are one of necessary life’s tools.