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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875[网页划词已开启]
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇基础扎实;句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多。

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There is no doubt that the information can be seen anywhere in our daily life with the development of the technology. In the meanwhile, the increasing number of people are fond of making the judgement immediately when they see or hear something. Apparently, it is unwise. A number of reasons can explain it. Firstly, it will have an effect on people's relationship. It will make people think that you are an arbitrary man. In the seconed place, it will make you have a big loss if you make decisions without a deep consideration. For instance, if you are a businessman, you must do a market research before you want to invest something rather than make judgement when you see what is interesting. Last but not least, it will make you become a thoughtless person. Personally, we should have a deep consideration before we make the decision. Only do it, can we become wise.

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