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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33573[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
评语:

句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;作者要注意增加使用高级词汇,单词拼写做的挺好;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

One winter day, on my back one home, there came a heavy rain. Forgetting to bring the umbrella, I had to run through the rain and hurriedly looked for a shelter. Fortunately, there was a range of stores with a big roof and some fellow-sufferers were waiting for me. Seeing me covered with rain rush up the steps, they quickly left a room and then unconsciously took a small step back, again. Spinning around, I found it not crowed at all in fact and if we got a little gathering, maybe there was more spare room for other people and we could also be a bit warmer. Nevertheless everyone fixed on their phones and rooted in their own areas. The wind howled and it became a downpour. It was so cold for me that I went in one bookstore. It seemed this bookstore met a good time. The landlady ran around here and there, grinned and enraptured to talk with customers. She looked more than 40 years old, small eyes with a round mask, a blank purse across one shoulder, and her greasy fingers were counting the paper money. All of these proved her a shrewd businesswoman. I went inside and casually chose a book with a warm color cover. I sat down and fell into the wonderful world in the book quickly. Time flies, the crowded gradually melted away. It seemed the rain stopped, but I was in deep attract by this book. Even though I knew almost every bookstore owner disliked those who just read books, I wanted to leave later because I just had not enough money to buy it. Unfortunately, with the sound of footsteps, I saw a pair of high heels going straight to me. This woman must want to drive me away, I thought. No wonder the old saying went: merchant just value profit. Why did she hold a paper cup not a feather duster? I stood consciously to leave, but suddenly, a warm current went into my palm and through my heart.

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