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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分高级词汇；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
From:hubin@163.com Date:Dec.26th,2008 To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com Subject:To establish business relationships Dear sir or madam, I knew your new product of NO.5670 during the exhibition on the date of Dec 12th to 22nd and i was quite interested in it.Please send us a price list and an instruction.Thank you for your are attention and we are expecting to establish business relationship with you. we are looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely, Hu bin
