文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。
A lots of university offer various of opnion lessons to students.Students can choice differents lessons according to his minds.Take myself as an example,i choice lessons in terms of my interesting.Therefore,music lesson and PE are two lesson i am finally choose.There are three reason about why i decide to learn those lessons. First,i’m verry like singing since i’m a little girl,i hope i can learn more singing skill from class.Second,Sport also is my love.I think sport is helpful our healthy and keep our mind clear.Third,singing and sport both a way to make people relax.When i feel tired or sad,i can enjoy myself though it. I hope everyone can choice your love lesson.