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2006年专八英语作文真题:Ambition

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:01浏览次数:3429
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题目 Ambition
说明 Joseph Epstein, a famous American writer, once said, "We decide what is important and what is trivial in life we decide that what makes us significant is either what we do or what we refuse to do but no matter how indifferent the universe may be to our choices and decisions, these choices and decisions are ours to make. We decide. We choose. And as we decide and choose, so are our lives formed. In the end, forming our own destiny is what ambition is about do you agree or disagree with him?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者在句法层面做的很棒;作者词汇基本功很好,在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用

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Ambition Ambition and dream, which drive us to doing what we want to do, can be synonyms or interdependent under some certain condition. In our childhoods, we were always told that we should have a great dream, which becomes an ambition when we grow up. Some people are crazy for money, some for fame and some for the both. We are driven by the ambition of ours or our parents or our vitality along the way and eventually become the present selves. Our dreams may change with time, thus our ambition being changed together. When I was a child, my dream is to be a singer. At that time, I always sang songs to a cat or dog at my home. But after I become a junior middle school student, I found I was not good at it, thus giving up. Later on, I want to be an accountant, which activates my love for math. While time tells me that accounting is somewhat boring, while language is fantastic. So when I come to the university, I become an English major , the present self. Through the example of myself, we can grasp the idea that what we want to be or what we dream for may change as the passage of time and it won`t turn immediately to reality. But, to some extent, it does drive as forward to looking for our real dream and the proper ambition we need to have. So, ambition is always around us no matter we are powerful or powerless, rich or poor. As long as we can think, we will have something we dream for, then ambition turning up unconsciously or consciously. Therefore, on the one hand, we need to respect our heart and follow our heart, making efforts under the guidance of our ambition, while, on the other hand, we should be also able to distinguish the right from the wrong and find a proper self-orientation. Remember, what we think and we desire , to a degree, do shape who we are.

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