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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9030
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;缺少组织,上下文衔接欠流畅。

用户练习作文:

With the development of economy,the internet play an important role in our daily life.Nowadays,we can study on the internet.However,education doesn’t simply mean learning to obtain information. On the past,education can be acquired by book.Little by little,we also can obtain by the internet.such as,Google,BaiDu,SouGou and so on.Whenever,we can learn what need.we can learn much knowledge of we can’t learn on class.We can study but go to school.Nevertheless,education doesn’t simply mean learning to obtain information.Because of education still include morality and health of your body and so on. So,the internet of learning is good for us.Nonetheless,we should take full of the internet,make it can be used for us.Besides,we should learn education not only information but also morality and the health of body and so on.

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