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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12881
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;文章上下文衔接自然。

用户练习作文:

The electronic communication seems to take the place of face-to face contact in this picture above. Andy's dad is typing to "talk" to her, hoping she would come downstairs for eating. Absolutely, the Internet has totally changed most people's lives. It's a real big bang to human society, and this revolution does mean a lot. But if it means that electronic communication is more valuable to replace our conditional face-to-face way? Well, I definitely disagree with that. To be honest, communicating with others face to face has a long history and it actually made difference when communication became the most important thing in our daily life. Surely, Internet does play an important part in this environment, It's a type of improvement, but never a substitution.

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