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My favorite teacher is Ms Zhang.She is 30years old.She has long hair and she is tall.Ms Zhang is a music teacher.I like music class because I love singing and Ms Zhang like sing too. In the music class we are very happy and relaxing.And she is very good.Students both like she .This is my favorite teacher.what about you?