2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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We are teached even when we were children that we must keep trustly.However,we almost forget the natual we had. Maybe,the development of our country makes us lose our trust.But,is it really the reason which makes us unconfidently?Of couse not.Actly,the more competetion we face,the more trust we need.It is all known,The most successful company,whatever it is,will makes the trust be their key of victory.