文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;文中词汇表达太过贫乏,高级词汇使用要更加熟练,存在个别拼写错误。
Do you know I like playing computer games? I will play computer games a long times .And I will do excersice everdays,because I want to have a good body .I want to learn to play the piano ,because it is very intersting.I like to read books,because it is good for me.I think I will have a good vacation.
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