2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文章组织结构良好；文章词汇表达丰富，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；文中从句的使用的有点少了。

In China,Shantou is one of the beautiful cities.Shantou, located in south of China, is a secnic spots in Guangdong. In Shantou,the ZhongShan Park is famous for clear lack,many kinds of flowers and lots of high trees.What's more, there hold a Flower Show each year and it appeal lots of people to appreciated various flowers.At that time, singers are singing on the shining stage, children are playing with each other.Something look so happy.Thus, i will take my foreign friend to visit the ZhongShan Park,seeing the beauty of clear lack and green trees in the day,looking around the hot Flower Show at night. I think we wil have a good time in the process of visiting my homentown.