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In China, Shantou is one of the beautiful cities.Shantou, located in the south of China, is a scenic spot in Guangdong. In Shantou, the ZhongShan Park is famous for clear lack, many kinds of flowers and lots of high trees. What's more, there held a Flower Show each year and it attracted lots of people to appreciate various flowers. At that time, singers are singing on the stage and children are playing with each other. Everything looks very happy. Thus, I will take my foreign friend to visit the ZhongShan Park, seeing the beauty of clear lack and green trees in the day, looking around the hot Flower Show at night. I think that we will enjoy a good time in the process of visiting my hometown.
