2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

I am excited to hear that my foreign friend ,Tom,is going to have a vacation in my hometown,and cannot wait to express my welcome.For sake of his hospitiality I enjoyed in England,I would like to show him around the landscape.Sure,I will take him to Lake Xi,which is on the top of my list. Lake Xi is famous for its fascinate views in China,even in other countries.