作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;文中词汇表达不够丰富,高级词汇方面要多累积;衔接成分偏少。
I am excited to hear that my foreign friend ,Tom,is going to have a vacation in my hometown,and cannot wait to express my welcome.For sake of his hospitiality I enjoyed in England,I would like to show him around the landscape.Sure,I will take him to Lake Xi,which is on the top of my list.