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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3373
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分53.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;词汇表达较丰富,高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间,文中有些单词拼错了。

用户练习作文:

The honest is very important for us, if we lie in the life, we will know the consequence in the later. when i am children, my father always tell me some quality i should have, including the honest, but i can't understand why he told me that, so isomethings i won't follow him, oneday, i saw my friends eat candy,and i want have, but i have no money, so i back to home, and take some money from my father wallet, so i eating the delicious candy, when i return home, my father asking me, if i take his money, i am afriad, and lie my father, my father look at me, slowly say: Tom, remember i told you? father love you, whatever you did, you shouldent lie. i am very shame, fell sad and depressed, i tell him i take his money buy candy, and i am very sorry, i wouldent lie in the last time. Honest is very omportant, if you want keep friendship with others, you should honest, if you want somebody believe you, you should honest, everybody should honest.

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