2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

文中词汇丰富度不足，拼写检查也要重视；运用了一些简单从句，但不是很熟练；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织。

How should parents help children to be independent Have many parents do everything for their children now.That children morn than depend parents .parents and their children are very happy.Because parents love own children in the world. I think it is wrong.I know only child is very impotanly to a family now.For children to be independent that parents should teach children do everything.For example housework cook dinner live.This right.Because parents can not at hand forever.The parents should believe own children.Because your chlidren is the best man in the future.Parents should suitable help your children rather than doing everything. If you see my article should do my suggest.That your children can grow up.I hope all children can grow up help own parents.