2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

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In recent years, most parents always focus on the scores of the children at school. It is easy to ignore mental health on them. Every students were taught by teachers to attend to great university to make successful future. As far as i known, meaningful life is made of good mental and physiology, not just need one of them. The schools have a lot of responsibility to let students figure out what important it is. Even though it is difficult to do. Developing good habits and skills is more important than increasing your grades at school.