2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

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In recent years, people who travel around the world are increasing every years. It mean to travel outside play an important role in normal life. The remarkable development of economy accompany steady growth of people's living standard. Most people pay attention on require entertainment which include go out and see all kinds of landscape.