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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17425
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。

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Currently man keeps a close relationship with computer. There are increasing number of person not living normally without computers. Actually,computer is playing a role of vital importance not ony in our "daily life",but also in our studying. It can help us search for various information to solve series of problems in terms of studying and living.For instant,if we are to go for a travel ,it's a excellent approach to surfing on the Internet to inquire some people who excels in it. Notheless,we cannot acquire these information without computer around us. On the flip side,computer bring us some stuffs not beneficial to people,especially children and teenagers. There is an example that not a few teenagers could browse several websites about sex. In sum, computer can do favors to us ,but can also take us awful issues. Therefore,we'd better use it in a smart way.

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