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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒。

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Currently man keeps a close relationship with computer. There are increasing number of person not living normally without computers. Actually,computer is playing a role of vital importance not ony in our "daily life" ,but also in our study. It can help us search for various information to solve series of problems in terms of studying and living.For instance, if we are to go for travel, it's a prominent approach to surfing on the Internet to inquire some people who excel in it. Nonetheless, we cannot acquire these information without computer around us. On the flip side,computer bring us some stuffs not beneficial to people, especially children and teenagers. There is an example that not a few teenagers could browse several websites about sex. In sum, computer can do favors to us, but can also take us awful issues. Therefore, we'd better use it in a smart way.

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