加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;请注意积累词汇量,拼写错误比较多;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
I have lot of hobbies,but I have not lot of free time .Now I am on a summer vacation. I could do some interesting things.such as play basketball,play football,play computers everday.Besides,I can listen to music every everning.I also like hungling with my friend.I want to go to bed every erening .
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