2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。

In recent years, people who travel around the world are increasing every year. It means traveling outside plays an important role in normal life. The remarkable development of economy accompanies steady growth of people's living standard. Most people pay attention on entertainment which include to go out and see all kinds of landscape. From other perspectives, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. Though go outside instead of staying at home, this activity will release properly some pressure and take rest on holiday. On the other hand, when you are all in, you could discover another way to make your mentality and physiology move up level. There is a reason which people take travel into consideration.