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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12881
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇表达比较恰当,避免拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

nowadays,with the development of technology,it has become a nomal phenomenon that nearly every family can use Internet,which benefits familis a lot in many ways include shopping,reading , searching and commucation and so on. Let's take the influence on communication for instance.on the one hand,Internet can make communication more convenient,especially for those who are far away from others.Internet realizes the face-to-face communication and also connect more people from different areas together.On the other hand,Internet has distenced the mind and soul among people,it has showed that people tend to look at their mobile phone screen whilr sitting together with family or friends and say nothing.More and more people are drown into the virtue world and can't get back to the real world. In general,electronic communication is Indispensable today.However,it can't totally replace the real world contract.Because we can't live without a physical world .

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