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句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较丰富地使用高级词汇；行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以。
Everyone has only a chance in their life. People have different ideas about the meaning and the purpose of life. As far as I am concerned, I agree with an essay commenting on the saying "the meaning of life is to find your gift, the purpose of life is to give it away". On the one hand, the talent of people can become a source of his happiness, providng the true orientation with people. For example, a famous pianist called LangLang, his gift attracted people before three years old. It is a fundation of his life.On the other hand, using talent of person truly can help people accomplish themselves value positively so that they can make contributions to the whole society. In conclusion, let's find us true gifts and make the most of it to come true a happy and valuable life.
