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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71621
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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作者词汇基础扎实;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。

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Everyone has only a chance in their life. People have different ideas about the meaning and the purpose of life. As far as I am concerned, I agree with an essay commenting on the saying "the meaning of life is to find your gift, the purpose of life is to give it away". On the one hand, the talent of people can become a source of his happiness, providing the true orientation with people. For example, a famous pianist called LangLang, his gift attracted people before three years old. It is a fundation of his life. On the other hand, using talent of person truly can help people accomplish themselves value positively so that they can make contributions to the whole society. In conclusion, let's find us true gifts and make the most of it to come true a happy and valuable life.

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