2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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Nowadays, there are an increasing number of people pouring into large cities, however, to their disappointment, their the quality of life is decreasing. The reason why people's the quality of life decline is circumstance of cities. First of all, enviromental pollution is an extreme proble people face in many cities, such as air pollution. One major factor of this pollution is toxic emission from vehicles, especially from the large number of private cars. Furthermore, over-pressure is also a common trouble. In a fast tempo life of cities, people don't have enough time to exercise, play and even acompany their family. These situations pose a great threat to their health. on the whole, it is high time that took some effective measures to alleviate the problems of cities. As far as I'm concerned, with the joint efforts from individuals and the government, it can be eventually resolved. To begin with, in order to reduce the emission, the government should restrict the number of private cars on the road and encourage residents to use public transport. Individual should enhance environmental awareness to beautify the environment of cities. Next, for the sake of relieving the pressure, citizens in big cities are advised to slow down their pace and allocate more time to relax and do exercise regularly. Finally, for avoiding loneliness, it is advisable that dwellers in megalopolises often communicate with their family and friends and attend more public activities. In conclusion, there are many issues which lead to diminish their quality of life. Currently,However, urbanization is an irreversible tend that more and more people opt for living in large cities. I believe, the effective combination of the solutions mentioned above will protect the citizen's benefits and enable them to live more comfortably there.