作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
Along with industrialization,human has became more capable to explore the nature,which has promoted our society and raised our living standard. Nevertheless on the other hand,lots of serious environmental problem has been brought up due to the deforestation and extensive use of fossil fuel.Can we find a way out to promote this situation or it is has been already too late?Around this issue,people's opinions differ largely. It is never too late to mend unless we do take measures to deal with those problems.To begin with,I would like to cite an instance about pandas in China.About 10 years ago,panda was recognized as extremely endangered species due to the deforestation and the deficiency of food.After decades years of effort,according to the official announce of IUCN,panda is no longer a endangered animal any more.Efforts by China,have brought its numbers back from the brink,which can be considered as an evidence of effective effort.