作者词汇基础扎实;作者句法知识扎实,但从句稍微偏少;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
Is sociability the most important personal quality of a university student? Everyone is an indispensable member of our society and our society will not be intact without everyone`s existence. So, when it comes to the question that which is the most personal quality of a university student? Is sociability the most important personal quality of a university student? My answer is yes. I will explain my view from the role or responsibility of a university student and the relations between individual and society. We`ve heard such a saying in our childhood that the young generation is the future of our motherland and the younger generation is the flowers in the garden of our motherland, which means that our motherland fosters us and we will take the responsibility of taking care of our motherland when we grow up. We, as a university students, acquire knowledge from the platform of university , which is built up by the joint efforts of the whole society. We benefit from the society, so it`s impossible for us to get totally independent from the society, and the only way we can chose is to be integrated with our society. The relation between our individual and the society is similar to that between fish and water. Without water, fish will die. Detaching from society, individuals will be hard to make a living. No matter we are university students or not, we all need the nutrients of society, which means we must take advantage of the platform provided by society and exert our roles in satisfying the needs of society as well. Only in this way can we realize our self-value at largest range. Taking the role of individuals and the relation between individual and society, I hold the belief that sociability should be the most important personality for a university student.