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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
If you focus on one aspect of fashion or every aspect,you must know fashion id associated with art ,culture and economy. When we refer to fashion and economy,we all know the hemline theory.By 1920, the university of Pennsylvania economist George Taylor theory put forward an image description of market movements.The theory is also called dress skirt side effect.When women generally choose short skirt, skirt tucked up, the stock market has also risen, as the last century 20 s and '60 s;Instead when women wearing dresses, skirt edge to decline, the market also gradually lower, as a century 30 s and 40 s.But today,does the theory still correct?A reverse thinking is that when economic depression, low job security are more dependent on women marriage and birth, so increases sexual attraction, wearing more exposure and sexy clothes to attract men.I think the new thinking is more right. As far as art and culture,we have to say Paris fashion week. Paris fashion week can date back to 1910.The beginning of the 17th century, Paris was a generation generation to accumulate the fashion and good reputation.The windy city rich women around the world have never disappointed.Established as early as the end of the 19th century French fashion association, has been committed to Paris as the fashion capital of the world are status made strong - this is also the ultimate goal of the association.They help new designers into line, organize and coordinate the Paris fashion week schedule, in order to buy hand and fashion journalists try to see every show.With the influence of French fashion association, the Louvre carew sailor hall (CarrouselduLouvre) and the tuileries gardens (JardindesTu ileries) open to become the official show.They to a global media and buy a hand, promote fashion week will show up every designer.In the imitation goods today, but also have a pirated out piracy, for "made in France".Lacoste,Chanel,Chirstian Dior and so on,they all are famous at home and abroad which from France. Today,the age is changing and the ideas of people is also changing.We must see the relationship between fashion and art,culture ,economy in a new way.