字数:200满分:100分
作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量。
As is shown above, we can see a “huoguo”, a traditional Chinese food originated in Sichuan province, in the middle of the picture. As well as, a variety of “foods” such as Kung fu,Shakespeare, Peking Opera are mixed in the pot. A line beneath saying “Cultural hotpot is not only delicious but also full of nutrition, give this picture a perfect explanation. It’s not hard to conclude that the painter vividly compared the cultural fusion to this cultural hotpot. This trend, which people believe is still in its infancy, actually have appeared as early as decades years ago and will no doubt go further. International exchange must be the most indispensably important reason for causing this phenomenon. Moreover, the high developed technology become a powerful driven force which is constantly searching for more convenient ways to communicate. Fact have proved that cultural communication is the best way for people from different country to know each other. I have never suspected that cultural communication will serve as a powerful weapon to break the bias between east and west. It’s obviously that multi-culture has became the theme of current world. Only in this way, I firmly believe, can racism, class hatred and religion hatred be exterminated.