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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40897
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

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Many people are used to drawing conclusions immediately after seeing or listening something without thinking.This isn't a smart way because it may results of misunderstands and rumors. Now,we can express our views through various social platforms such as Facebook,Tiwtter,SNS,Webo and Wechat.Everybody can show opinions,ideas or even pictures about life.The social networking makes our distance shorter and shorter then informations become more and more.Explosive informations confuse our auditory sense and visual sense so we often lost the judgement.Sometimes we draw conclusions immediately without any thinking then rumors fly all over the sky.For example,Wechat as a new communication tool is well received by people especially elders for its convenient and multpurpose. In particular,there are numerous informations about keeping health absorbing elders. However they judge those informations whether useful by the title of compositions and few of them scan the contain carefully. Lastly,these illusive informations result of bad influence. The rumor stops when it comes to a wise person. We live in a fast-food times with explosive informations.If we don't think more,we couldn't distinguish the truth and the falsity.We should not jump to conclusions.Let's investigate first.

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