托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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Recently, a great noumber of citizens were move out metropolitans to the countrysides, many claim that living in a rural area is better than livig around a lot of people. While I will keep my opinion which is "living in city is better than living in the rural area". In the industrialized time, a teen who want to get progress better wrok in city, because more challenges and changce are supplied in this conpetetive field. What counts most in the young period of a teenager must be advancement. However, challenges borns with population of people in the competetion. Therefore, just survive from the city to give yourself the most huge progress. What's more, the big enterprises must not exist in the samll town, such as the state-owned companies, there has little chance for you to compete. On the contrary, if you find a job in the advanced city, a pile of competed changce is waiting for you, such as many international coorperations and cohesive company which coorperate with many state-owned companies. In a word, a man who want chance, city must be your best choice.