托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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Recently, a great noumber of citizens were move out metropolitans to the countryside, many claim that living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people. While I will keep my opinion which is "living in city is better than living in the rural area". At this industrialized time, a teen who want to get achievements better wrok in the city, because more challenges and changce are supplied in this competetive field. What counts most in the young period of a teenager must be advance. However, challenge borns with the population of people in competetion. Therefore, just survive from the city to give yourself the most huge progress. What's more, the big enterprises must not exist in the small town, such as the state-owned companies, there are less chance for you to compete. On the contrary, if you find a job in the advanced city, a pile of competed changce is waiting for you, such as many international corperations and cohesive company which corperate with many state-owned companies. In a word, a man who wants the chance, city must be your best choice.