托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用。

Recently, a great number of citizens were move out metropolitans to the countryside, many claims that living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people. While I am by no means agree with this opinion which is "living in city is more terrible than living in the rural area". At this industrialized time, a teen who wants to get achievements better work in the city, since more challenges and chance is supplied in this competitive field. What counts most in the young period of a teenager must be advances. However, challenge borns with the population of people in competition. Therefore, just survive from the city to give yourself the most huge progress. What's more, the big enterprises must not exist in the small town, such as the state-owned companies, there is less chance for you to compete. On the contrary, if you find a job in the advanced city, a pile of competed chance is waiting for you, such as many international corporations and cohesive company which coorperate with many state-owned companies. In a word, a man who wants the chance, city must be your best choice.