2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。

The Mid-autumn Festival is the one of the traditional festival in China.It usually comes on the August 15th of lunar calendar.On that day,the family unite together,enjoying the full moon and eating moon cakes.This is the happiest day among the whole year ,even the people far away from hometown come back .Besides,they always conduct frequent activities such as touring and visiting the relatives and friends.Around China,the atmosphere of the festival become stronger than usual.